Red Passion

i think that you have a good vision but that maybe your camera isnt capable of taking professional quality photos. The shoe which is supposed to be in focus, isnt in focus, you can see a double blur. Now that could be due to not using a tripod, in a low light situation...it could be due to your exposure, or shutter speed, or it could be that your camera just cant get that degree of clarified detail.

i think that once you solve these problems you will be able to market your work on a greater level.